Why I Love Australia
Bronwyn Bancroft is an amazing author and illustrator. She has created the book, 'Why I love Australia', filled with rich language to excite the reader. The story takes us on a journey to explore different Australian landscapes. This week, 5/6J have been creating their own text to match some of the illustrations. Here is one amazing example of rich language to engage the reader:
"The Great Australian Plains"
Where eagles fly and ants scurry over the green, luscious grass. Calm wind blows from the north on a cool summer's day and cyan water flows from a billabong and flows down the river. You can see a fish leap gracefully from the azure coloured water.
Published by Greeny.
"The Great Australian Plains"
Where eagles fly and ants scurry over the green, luscious grass. Calm wind blows from the north on a cool summer's day and cyan water flows from a billabong and flows down the river. You can see a fish leap gracefully from the azure coloured water.
Published by Greeny.
More quality work samples:
The snowy mountains looks like a coat of the whitest wall with little pops of colour around the snow. As cold as a popsicle and as sharp as blades on the top of a mountain. JB HiFi
The snow that was freezing wet was surrounded by a powerful blizzard .White as sugar and tall like the majestic Eiffel Tower. Smells like wet blanket, feels like water. Snow soft as a fluffy unicorn’s fur. Smick
The Frosty Mountains looks like a colossal white sheet. The Snowy Mountains tastes like icy cold water
The Icy Cold Mountains feels wet, freezing and soft. The Frozen Mountains smells as plain as paper.
The Snowy Mountains is terrific, luscious, luxurious,fantastic, amazing, good, spectacular, great , graceful and snowy. Tia
The Snowy Mountains look like food. The snow looks like sugar and the mountains looks like spaghetti. The temperature feels like -3 but I think the ground feel as soft as a squirel. Burkey
On a large landscape sits snowy white, rocky, overflowed with delight Mountains. It has a dark blue sky at night and a nice light cold aqua by morning, children full of enjoyment ready to slide down its icy cold steep hills along with luscious fluffy snow. Baker
The Great Barrier Reef is humongous, bright, infinitely colourful and watery. When you’re in the Barrier Reef you feel like you’re weightless, energetic and it’s like you’re in a whole other world with all the bright colourful, fast little fish swimming all around your happy self. Schoey
Children happily playing with their friends, cricket balls shooting through the sky, the trees swaying among the warm breeze, dogs running wild after the ball boys and girls all having a big game of backyard cricket, the luscious green grass breaking your fall. Perri Perry
The snowy mountains looks like a coat of the whitest wall with little pops of colour around the snow. As cold as a popsicle and as sharp as blades on the top of a mountain. JB HiFi
The snow that was freezing wet was surrounded by a powerful blizzard .White as sugar and tall like the majestic Eiffel Tower. Smells like wet blanket, feels like water. Snow soft as a fluffy unicorn’s fur. Smick
The Frosty Mountains looks like a colossal white sheet. The Snowy Mountains tastes like icy cold water
The Icy Cold Mountains feels wet, freezing and soft. The Frozen Mountains smells as plain as paper.
The Snowy Mountains is terrific, luscious, luxurious,fantastic, amazing, good, spectacular, great , graceful and snowy. Tia
The Snowy Mountains look like food. The snow looks like sugar and the mountains looks like spaghetti. The temperature feels like -3 but I think the ground feel as soft as a squirel. Burkey
On a large landscape sits snowy white, rocky, overflowed with delight Mountains. It has a dark blue sky at night and a nice light cold aqua by morning, children full of enjoyment ready to slide down its icy cold steep hills along with luscious fluffy snow. Baker
The Great Barrier Reef is humongous, bright, infinitely colourful and watery. When you’re in the Barrier Reef you feel like you’re weightless, energetic and it’s like you’re in a whole other world with all the bright colourful, fast little fish swimming all around your happy self. Schoey
Children happily playing with their friends, cricket balls shooting through the sky, the trees swaying among the warm breeze, dogs running wild after the ball boys and girls all having a big game of backyard cricket, the luscious green grass breaking your fall. Perri Perry